documentary project

 Here is my finale evaluation

 Here is some feedback to my finale documentary. As you can see I have gained some finale feedback saying what I have improved from the first draft and what went well. I have gained positive feedback which is really good as my first draft was quite bad and this feedback shows me how well I have  improved.

 Here is my finale documentary which might seem rushed as I lost all my footage which was a big problem and had to reshoot it.

 Here is my feedback and what I need to improve. feedback.pptx from KieronThompson1

 Here is the first draft of my documentary.